likesummer on March 9th, 2012, 6:52 pm
Ahh, thanks guys for all the comments. Bhan was super and replied to a lot of them and I promise to reply to any too! This page was a lot of fun to work on and I'm excited for all the adventure that's coming up. :>
Vons on March 9th, 2012, 7:02 pm
i can finally start drawing dakota with his scar! OMGGG YAY. it was so weird drawing him without it.
(didn't cass do like, the most amazing job on this page? the cool to warm transition is so fitting. ANYWAYS, enjoy! we love hearing from you guys, and i'm so happy you all seem to enjoy it. :> )
koenma on March 9th, 2012, 7:01 pm
permanent snarl :(
doin great so far!
Forbidden_Requiem on March 9th, 2012, 8:39 pm
i love his transmorphamication
mewmewramazika on March 9th, 2012, 9:37 pm
Lip scar <3
Skriptkitty on March 9th, 2012, 9:43 pm
I don't want to be that one person who just nitpicks something on EVERY page, but his skull in panel one seems a bit flat compared to other panels. I really love the overall structure of his face though, it's really powerful and attractive. :D
likesummer on March 9th, 2012, 9:48 pm
@koenma That's Dakota's trademark look. Fffahaha. Thankyou!
@Forbidden_Requiem :> Thanks, we wanted the page to kinda have that sort of transformation.
@mewmewramazika <3 It's the coolest.
@Skriptkitty It's all good. We're probably not going to go back and fix pages since we have a large story to tell. We're both learning while we create this comic so there will be mistakes along the way but we'll improve as time passes! That's the beauty of growth. I'll try to be more aware of the way I paint things and tend to construct them. (I'm pretty sure I hollowed out his cheeks and made his face a little more angular more for like an emphases from start to finish, but oh well!) We make a page and move on. Thanks for the comment though!
Skriptkitty on March 10th, 2012, 2:58 pm
@likesummer No worries, I'm just glad you took it as constructive crit instead of a whiny comment (haha). Of course I wouldn't expect you to fix it (good lord after all that beautiful painting? No way!) and I look forward to seeing how everything progresses both story and art-wise. :)
Clyve (Guest) on June 18th, 2012, 6:02 pm
This whole scenario reminds me of A Wind Named Amnesia.
MegaAnimeFreak7 on August 11th, 2012, 7:28 pm
It's the Walking Dead bros. XDD
SomiJuli on August 14th, 2012, 8:36 am
sweet! nice job on the scary/crazy aspect of this story. all the blood and gore looks amazing. and daaaaaanngg. wonder how he got that nasty scar...and how he lived through it.
December on October 16th, 2012, 2:55 am
Sexy man just went BAMF